Beauty of the Rainbow

I have missed reading your beautiful poetry. This is romantic and very classy! awesome!

This is an awesome poem...I wish I could write as well as you do, hun!!!! Perfect flow of your poem....5/5....

Beauty of the Rainbow

Dearest, how I yearn
to exist within the unwrapped
folds of your heart.

>>>AWw a veryyyy very romantic stanza..
I loved the word exist within the unwrapped
folds..u could have said in ur heart..easier for u..but
it would be not one bit amazing..as much as the way
u worded it.. unique!

Explore every crevice and feel -
every fragile thought that bleeds.
Ride with you - together-
through tumultuous waves of memories
that immerse your spirit
in salty waters.
^this stanza is powerful, meaningful
and romantic.
I love the usage of each vocab.

Oh how I ache for the passionate kiss
of your unspoken words.
To breathe ..
the breath of your breath.
To cry ...
the tears of your tears.
>>the repetition is too emotional..too possesive
and really really passionate..I can't remember
I have felt emotions in any piece b4, as much
as in this one!

Lastly Dearest !
To love - hand in hand ( SWEET)
beneath a blanket of cloudy skies
and a half - filled cup of sunshine.( AWWWW i love i love this line..reminds me of my poem..and of myself sure:P )..cup filled with
And - together- unfold
the beauty ...
of the rainbow.
^^Perfect ending and very poetic.. the more
am reading ur work..the more am loving it!
Thought provoking and inspiring..

Lu, if this were any good it would have a 5/5 and a front page win.. wait.. this must be pretty good then XD

I loved it, very good transitions and pauses.. it flows so well, like a rainbow. I don't know how I missed this contest, looks like it was fun...

"Double rainbow all the way across the sky.." - If you don't know what that is then google it, it will make your day.. but make sure you get the original video, not the song haha

Simply beautiful. From the imagery to emotion. The poem has great structure. Wonderful job!