You have me flabbergasted..I am speechless, really...
How come you write so well at such a young age? I read poems by other people that are approxiamately your age and a lot of them are about blue eyes and ditto skies, lol. You have such an eloquent way of expressing yourself, and this poem, inspired by a painting, is so unique and creative, hats off for you, sweetheart!
I begin to trust vexed tears
swimming in a tinted chasm
whom am I wholly befriending?
perhaps a reflection of myself
^^
This was stunning, because of the maturaty it shows in your way of thinking.