That was a really nice write. I've never seen this form before, it was a nice introduction for me. Keep up the wonderful work.

Peace, Joe

Gee..I really loved this, so unique!

Way to go, Silvia:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Loved this very much, I have seen this form before and its really unique & interesting. Nice to see it out there.. nicely done

Yay something new for me to try lol. This was clever and it looks so cool lol. I loved it and how simple it is. I'm really into patterns and neatness of my words so this was awesome to read. Bravo :) Nik

Yes well done. Not an easy form to play with but I think she would like what you did.

Sylvia
Wow. I have never seen this form before. you have done this so well. Interesting title and thoughts.
Great job!
Love Cindy

WOW! Superb Sylvia... :) Love this form , and the words you used. Excellent :)

I like this form and the choice of words you
used to state your message. Well done with
this write!

Haunting, true and beautiful. You are so good with different forms!!

shobhana

Interesting form. Is it 3 words total or 3 words in each "stanza"?

Thank you ofr introducing this form,I haven't seen it before. Nice!

Nicely done, I enjoy poems that say much with few words, each word then has immense power and generates many thoughts while reading.

A very beautiful and realistic write in only a few words.
Well done Sylvia.
Paul...

A very beautiful and realistic write in only a few words.
Well done Sylvia.
Paul...

Sylvia,

this look interestingly fantastic.

I like your work, the way you explore the many different forms. We can all become 'stuck in a rutt' and only choose what we are comfortable with, myself included. You are quite simply an inspiration!

Well done

Michael