I.. Can't even find the words to describe how this left me feeling.
Amazing write, that's for sure. Your wording and the way each line flows into the next.. astonishes me.

5/5 - Beautiful job.

I thought you had a nice word choice. The poem is both beautiful and sad. Well written in your unique style.

^The past haunts the present,
and the present effects the future,
his eyes became a distant light
guiding me to hell..
So I left the astral plane
sadistic for my pain..
hoping to find
his love once again.^

These words were heartfelt and insightful.....I am sure many can relate to this piece. Good structure and flow. Excellent job!

I loved this Mel, it speaks of words no truer than a heart does. And in this poem, you certainly did your feelings justice by writing them out in ink.

I believe each soul has one last dance,
a final breath -- concluding life.
^ ^ ^
This has got to be my favourite stanza, and how true...

I loved how you used beautiful imagery by commenting on palm reading, that is, if what you meant by life line and heart line are similar to what I perceived them to be.

Love love! this poem, looking forward to more from you!! XD