Comments : Just Another Girl

  • 14 years ago

    by Stazifer Stazington

    I love this!
    Exceptional use of vocabulary and figurative language.

  • 14 years ago

    by M I L L Y

    Oh my god
    and i mean it when i say it OMG
    this poem is freaking inspirational
    im sorry but i have nothing bad to say about it. i absolutly love this poem and i wish one day i can write a material this good you deft have a 5/5 and going in to my favs poems =] keep writing greatness =]

  • 14 years ago

    by Malboros pipe

    An exquisite princess not even gods angels can rival", this was by a shadow of a doubt the best line from this poem. The poem had a very smooth flow and the word selection was very professional. great work

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This was beautiful :) great job! "If I had a wish it would be to feel all her pain and sadness,
    When I look deep into her chestnut eyes I see the world."

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "She is the essence of all beauty on earth,
    The exception to the saying nobodies perfect.
    How could someone so precious possibly have flaws, The one thing in life for me worth dying to protect."

    These lines bring an irony to the poem, in a great way. The poem overall shows that this love of your life is someone you've really grown to care for & would give your life for.