Meena,

you are an extremely talented writer and it shows in this verse.

I especially like the line Blind beliefs wait by the shore"

well done.
shobhana

Meena,

you are an extremely talented writer and it shows in this verse.

I especially like the line Blind beliefs wait by the shore"

well done.
shobhana

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Fate is definatly an interesting topic & one that is interesting to hear the thoughts of others on. I loved the ending, how fate is written in ink and can't be altered. Nicely done.

I liked this piece a lot dear :) Very well done. Shobhana is write, you're a very talented write. Loved this :) Nik

Meena,

The Lira is a short and lovely format and I know from experience it's difficult to make a short poem like this interesting to read.

You succeeded however and gave the reader al lot to ponder upon.

I too believe that the course of our life is already known and we get to fill in the little details, the ones that make us unique.

Well done:)

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

Very nice and very short - even better. I think this work of your is very well penned and the words chosen seem to fit perfectly! Bravo!

Wonderful job on the Lira Meena
I really love this form. It allows so much to be said in so few lines.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy