by Splashley Jan 28, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
The sun rises and sets... |
by Splashley
It's supposed to be "up" not "you" |
by Miss Teach
I liked the cadence, the roll of this piece. "wake you sunshine" seems awkward - are you using sunshine as a proper name, a term of endearment or using it to clarify the "you?" |