Wipe My Tears Away

by Rachel   Jan 30, 2010


Why do you care?
No matter what I wear.

Why do you stay?
And wipe my tears away.

Why don't you leave?
Why do you hurt when I grieve?

Why do you wait?
Could this be fate?

What do you see?
I'm so scared to just be me.

I know I'm insecure.
So how are you so sure?

How come you love me?
The other guys don't see.

Please don't let me be right.
With all these feelings that I fight.

I really love you too.
But I'm afraid of showing you.

I know I'll fall apart.
So please don't break my heart.

I'm giving it to you.
Please help me make it new.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ares

    There's a lot of good stanzas in this poem, but there's also a few which to me break up the rythm which in turn makes some of the rhymes feel a bit forced.

    Feel free to message me and I'll point out what stanza's were great and which could have been better.

    All in all, this is a very good poem.

    --ares

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