Comments : Wipe My Tears Away

  • 14 years ago

    by Ares

    There's a lot of good stanzas in this poem, but there's also a few which to me break up the rythm which in turn makes some of the rhymes feel a bit forced.

    Feel free to message me and I'll point out what stanza's were great and which could have been better.

    All in all, this is a very good poem.

    --ares