by Shinobi Jan 30, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Bloody roses hit the ground softly |
by Lady Nik
Very lovely piece here. A lot different from the sad one I just made. I liked the flow and how well your words formed lines. I think the imagery was very strong in this piece and made it easy for me to relate to. Keep it up :) Nik |
I definately think a lot of people miss out on chances at love because they're afraid to get hurt or hurt again. The pain and loss we endure in life make us wiser and stronger... Great work on your poetry 5/5 |