by Nicholas W Jones Jan 30, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I loved you The day I met you I saw beauty In its truest sense I looked in your eyes And saw strength within your sou I saw kindness I saw a pure woman with a bold spirit. I saw you and instantly I knew You were all a women should be That you were the only one for me That I'd die to hold you, to kiss you And in the end I truly loved you |
I love this poem... it's very different. I don't even know what to say. this poem is very powerful and full of meaning. it took my breath away made me relate and feel the emotions you felt when you were writing it. You have some talent keep up the work. |
by Chicken Soup
Nice work, write more. I hunger for your work |
Thank you so much |
by Love Bug
That's Sweet, Great Job :] |