omg..wow that was amazing! u got so much talent!! never stop writing

That was a very good piece of poetry Danielle. Your work simply puts a smile on my face. I enjoy reading all of them...though I haven't really been commenting regularly. But I'll do my best to leave a few lines regarding your wonderful work. Hope to hear from you soon and take care!
Kristina

Very Nice Poem. I Know Exactly How That Feels To Be So Depressed And Have To Pretend To Be Happy. Nice Job. Keep Writing. Your Very Talented.

I love this poem. I can so totally relate! My God, so good!

Great ending. I was wondering if you meant to use the wrong "hole" in the line "My life is a hell whole". Because I suppose that could be a pun, but I'm not sure if you just made a mistake or not. Good work.

its like my poem Prison of Sadness, but better. i love this so much.

Lol good poem though even if it wasn't your best it was still amazing!
---tara