I like how you dont hold back yet just release all your emotions into your poems even if its not the best I've seen from you, I really likek that you express your emotions well and arent afraid to do so. Nicely done again .

I feel that this is a well expressed write of
love and pain; all released without holding
back anything..good write.

Breathing doesn't come to me now
it just passes me by like clouds

^^My favorite lines of the piece.

Nik,
I love how your writes seem to be so simple in wording but complex in meaning. It feels as if when you write, you hold nothing back; you just let it all flow so beautifully. There is not much more that I can say, other than that this was a wonderful read.

5/5
-KJ