Very good i like it :)
5/5
KiKi

This poem seems to be like, almost a speech. I can imagine a booming voice reciting each word clearly. Like a powerful, piece a speech even?

This was well written, a free verse that didn't drive me insane.

"looking for hope in your eyes
in the name of MUST i fight"
^I loved these two lines. A very interesting and intriguing play of words in the second line. "I must fight" "In the name of MUST I fight." A great sense of originality.

Great Job. I really liked this write, hope to see more in the future. (:

Nice work i like the words

You left me speechless .....
excellent 5/5

Every word brought the insanity closer
when silence is the death it self

^that line was absolutely wonderful. I got goosebumps while reading this. marvelous.

I was sucked in with the silent power of emotions this poem held itself especially the ending " every word brought the insanity closer when silence is the death it self" amazing

Chilling, haunting and beautiful, my favourite from you that I've read so far :-)