Promises of Yesterday. [Collab]

Delicate threads of hope aspire-
tethered from the heart,
kissed by possibilities, fired
by promises of yesterday

Beautiful lines

Beautiful

‘Butterflies have temporarily ceased-‘

I like the usage of words here, to see the colors of
life which freely roam just suddenly stop beautiful line.

`emotions that once ran blissful
Disabled: thick with cravings..
that gave me flight’

This is another one I like the description about emotion is
very well penned.

A good job done by you ladies!

I love this. "Butterflies have temporarily ceased-
due to your absence.
they no longer titillate desires...
their wings immobilized by loneliness."
great job :)

Nice collab. The first two lines sound just a little awkward but all in all the message comes through, longing for a love that is not be be. Well done.