by Aken Sol
The flow and the message was powerful. The range of syllables per line is a bit wide though, ranging from 3-12. But it's a choice and maybe there was a purpose beind it. All in all, great poem. |
by Sonya
great poem...you really have a lot of talent. and the best thing is , the poem actauly means something and it just has that kick lol. but yea awsum job! |
by nikki
great poem, really thought provoking, and very very interesting and well worded, put together perfectly and flowed very nicely except forfor one thing, |
yeah i agree with elisabeth, it really leaves you thinking because it can be intrepreted in a variety of ways, at least i intrepreted it in a few ways. but it was very good, good flow, a few parts didnt seem to flow quite right though, but other than that absolutly great! |