How I Ended My Life

by Kianna   Feb 8, 2010


Tears of blood I cry,
My veins will soon run dry.
You will see no more of me,
I will no longer be in your life.
Now watch as my shattered soul disappears,
I know you'll shed no tears.
Pool of blood,
Puddle of tears.
By my side lays a knife,
That's what I used to end my life.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    Well written, short but powerful:)

    I would switch "In your life I will no longer be" to "I will no longer be in your life"

    the original seems forced, and some of the best advice given to me was to not be afraid if something didn't rhyme:)

    great read

    Jessie

  • 14 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    Not too bad for a short one, try not doing it all in caps though. Takes away from the lines.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    Not too bad for a short one, try not doing it all in caps though. Takes away from the lines.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This isn't really something I would expect from you. Chatting I found you very .. full of life. Sad poem, I hope this doesn't depict your life

  • 14 years ago

    by Donna

    True word from the heart ..Ending our lives..Truely sad but only our own pain we want to stop nothing else we see...Well done.

    You take care and be safe
    Donna

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