Poetry Free for all

Okay! Now this is a poem I like. Why? Because, even though you didn’t have punctuation (I already covered that in your last comment - it’ll help a lot I promise, but, who am I to tell one how to write?) and it was short, it was beautiful.

Your use of words stunned me in this one. “The rhythm of the heart untatmed, unrestrainded in redundant beat,” was most definitely my favorite part. It describes the heart so well! Did you get to interview one [a hear]? Because it mimicks beautifully what a heart does. I don’t know why, but I’m certainly impressed with the wording here.

Nothing more to say; it was a short poem, but flawlessly beautiful (expect the punctuation!). I hope the rest are more like this one. :].

Take care.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Its almost as if time just stands still and the rivers flow and the sun never moves. We all have moments in our lives we wish could never end. Great work 5/5 Love the flow as always

My favorite lines, "The rhythm of a heart untamed
Unrestrained in redundant beat
Reaching relentlessly for the sky"
keep it up :)

While memories meander, just that line was the poem for me, i love the way the poem was short and sweet and very imaginative. Great work, very envious of this piece. While Memories Meander, sounds just like a dreamland.