by SheenaMarie Feb 8, 2010
category :
Life, society /
other
The drugs, the sex, the alcohol, and freedom, |
by Jenn
WoW I really loved this It was Great!! |
by trippetta TC
Your poem gave me chills, I can relate to the addiction part and the constant cravings that it causes. Very cathartic and hauntingly honest. |
by heartless
It shows true emotion and it makes the reader feel like they are there watching what is going on, like they can stop it but not before its to late. |
by Ixora
This poem is filled with understanding and pain. At the same time it seems like the narrator wishes the other had been stronger. Great imagery and choice of wording. |
by Mello193
This is really sad, a little hard to follow at times, but really emotional, you should fix up the order and flow a bit...overall very nice |