Wow!! that was well written. Nice imagery. enjoyed reading you.

good luck and peace
shobhana

How shall I capture
the glow ,
your smile reflects
on my lips?

I just adore these lines..a lovely image with a
touch of sadness lingering..

Beautifully written.. Perfectly tinged with sadness.. Your imagery here is perfect.

Touching write.

Reading this made me smile. it was sad, but beautiful. great job! :)would you please rrc mine? "the morning sun"

The imagery here is so beautiful. Wow...I really don't know what to say. I just love how creative this was. Very refreshing metaphors throughout the whole piece. I love the style as well and the sad story behind your words. Wonderful piece dear :) I;m gonna have to add you to my favs. You are really blowing my mind today, Nik