Ahh, this was beautiful. i noticed you tried a certain rhyme scheme that didn't quite work out in the last stanza. buuut regardless, this was a great write. it reminds me of my boyfriend, he's going to go into the airforce (not sure when exactly) but i think about it everyyy day. and reading this made me feel like i was living that one moment when he came back home.

lovely write.

-Liz