Purist Form

by LonelyNightsHurt   Feb 8, 2010


That strange feeling,
The one in your belly
Turning your head to mush,
And your legs to jelly

No words to describe it,
You just simply know
It's the look in your eyes,
That can't help but to show

The way it takes over,
Making it hard to breathe
Knowing that if you wanted,
You still could never leave

Hands embraced in a hug,
Fingers intertwined
Love. At its purist form
Leaves you completely blind

Lonely
xXx

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  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    That was beautiful!
    i like your simple choice in words, somehow it makes you feel that love, something so complicated, is actually very simple. Simple and pure!

    "No words to describe it,
    You just simply know
    It's the look in your eyes,
    That can't help but to show"
    - absolutely loved that first 2 lines! very true, sometimes it just hits you!

  • 14 years ago

    by MS Multani

    So beautiful n sooo true