How You Finished Me

by Hurtingsoul   Feb 9, 2010


I felt it
A cold dark night
And I let it
Consume me inside

Winds seeped in
Clouded the darkness
Frozen within
I see you. Your shameless

You smile
I shiver
You laugh
I quiver

The sky is moonless
I cant see you
But I feel you
I smell you
I taste you
I cant believe I want you
I'm restless

It starts to rain
And each drop
Is a pain

I'm done
With this love
Its ferocity is enough
Help me God!

You surround me
You touch me
You push me
You take me
And you end me

I look at the sky
Darkness dissipates
The sun rises high
And light annihilates

You. And then

I'm finished.

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  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I feel like the flow was slightly off and the punctuation was odd. but i like where you're going with it and i think i can see what you're trying to do. the storyline is great. really relatable. my favorite line was: "It starts to rain And each drop Is a pain." i really really loved this line. :) keep it up!

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