Find The Cure

Aww well i know the feeling to well how the memories make you smile but you cant stop the tears its a relative subject alot of people can relate to and a good writer can relate to their readers as you did and did a very good job of it as well it was extremly heartfelt and touching but so sad a mix of emotions that only lost love can bring great job!

I really liked your poem and many people can relate very well. Personally, for me to make the "find a cure" statement more pronounced I would rhyme it with one of the lines before so it really sticks in the readers head as your focus. But thats just my opinion. It was such a heartfelt poem and i'm sure it wasn't easy to write. Great job!!

A very strong piece, the emotion flows off every single word youve written in this poem!
Again the flow worked perfectly and I really liked your chioce of wording 5/5

"Liquid remains of dreams unfilled" that was such an awesome line because the reader just see's someone crying because they lost their love and all the dreams that went with it. Very heartfelt and sad excellent job as always. 5/5

Oh man that line about liquid remains of dreams unfulfilled run down my cheeks is chillingly good