At the Touch of Morning

by Meena Krish   Feb 9, 2010


At the touch of morning
a soft tune of gentle breeze
brings all things to life, as a flock of birds
chant morning hymns

The golden king reining this vast sky
plants diamond dews upon emerald body,
embracing her heart with a fresh scent
which awakens the spirit of flowers and trees

At the touch of morning
golden king reveals his passion,
sowing sweltering kisses on evergreen lips
making it tender and green

He lets his shimmering love spread
reaching her darkest corners and spot
together they nurture this land
for their children to live

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  • 14 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    This is an excellent piece of work,instilled with freshness ,softness and the positivity which shines,as the sun rises up in the sky.Beautiful description.Meena, keep it up.Congrats and God bless.

  • 14 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Well done good word flow but imagery could use a little work thinks I.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Very nice, at the touch of morning. Morning does bring good things, a new day and more of nature's beauty. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I agree - very nicely done and a pleasant read. i liked the line ; which awakens the spirit of flowers and trees. I know and hope they must have spirits. Bravoooo!

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Lovely Meena. love the personification of the sky and the sun. very nicely done.

    i especially love the line "reaching her darkest corners and spot"

    shobhana

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