Lovely Meena. love the personification of the sky and the sun. very nicely done.

i especially love the line "reaching her darkest corners and spot"

shobhana

I agree - very nicely done and a pleasant read. i liked the line ; which awakens the spirit of flowers and trees. I know and hope they must have spirits. Bravoooo!

Very nice, at the touch of morning. Morning does bring good things, a new day and more of nature's beauty. Well done.

Well done good word flow but imagery could use a little work thinks I.

This is an excellent piece of work,instilled with freshness ,softness and the positivity which shines,as the sun rises up in the sky.Beautiful description.Meena, keep it up.Congrats and God bless.