Once aain, the master of words. Excellent word choice and use of metaphors. Very heartfelt. I can feel your pain. Picture painting imagery. Great job!

I applaud you for such a masterpiece.
Very powerful.
Nothing more to say.
Congrats on the win..couldn't agree more with the committee.

Write on~

Amazing work mate, well named too - not often does a work inspire me.

I cant imagine how you can bury me in the sad song hahahaha..

anyway i really really like the line "i will bury you in the sad song"
keep it up

-sano

Adel
You never fail to impress with your verses.
Excellent job!
Congrats on your win!

Wow i LOVED this poem. so deep filled with emotion. i loved the line "i will bury you in the sad songs" very powerful piece. 5/5