Really well writting

Whoa shit. o.o i love it. The whole time i was reading this, i thought "wow. some serious shit happened..."

5/5

~tia

Great poem...gives great insight

This one captivated me completely !
I think you have outdone yourself with this one, It is perfect in every way.
I would love for you to read my poem...
If I Am To Survive
.. Simply to weigh its contrast & similarity to this one .....Jim The Man Within.....5/5

This was tragically beautiful, and I can truly say that I know how you feel. But just like I found a true, loving parent, so can you. His name is God, and He'll never mistreat, deceive, or ignore. He works in mysterious ways, but it's all for the better in the end;)

Out of options, decision comes. Before you proceed, weigh the end. No pain comes without a signal. Pain is God's final instruction. Things go wrong to turn good at last.