I added this to my favorites, i loved it. i havent really commented on a poem in a long time, but i liked this one. good job.

Really great work right here! the rhyming was verry good. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Good work, truely is

Excellent selection of words. The rhyming is awesome, I find that very appealing, few poets care about that nowadays.

*Like* =D

You're amazing, I love the rhythm in this one. I hope things get better for you, you deserve it.

(thanks for commenting me!)

Seriously, really good write, it was so enjoying to read, the flow was perfect, even though the poem was sad, i really liked it. 5/5.

I loved the way this poem flowed so well. Was a really emotional write. Particularly liked the ending

"Thats what rips my soul to shreads,
now beauty is no more, instead,
instead it makes my arms bleed red,
my beauty, it has been misread. "

Just love the contrast of beauty. Good job =)

So Chilling, but why not bring about beautiful thoughts in your universe? I'll be here to read that as well.

Beautifully written.
<3

Wooow,what a nice piece>5/5keep it up>

Thank you for your comment on my poem. It's probably one of my best written ones. I wrote it at an extremely hard time.

This poem, is beautifully written. You have a talent in the way you write and rhyme. Keep up the good work.

What a beautiful release Poetry is for us ,
& often such a necessity too .
Though I appreciate the beauty I found in this perticular poem , Try to keep in mnd , Your beauty you are so reluctant to acknowledge is only the gift wrapping for who you are inside, as I believe you agree.
So let your inner beauty outshine all the eye can see & you will find the praise of your beauty redirected to where it belongs .
I know you can do it , You're already on your way ...Jim The Man Within ...5/5

I'll start by saying that I like the title, it's so eye catching.

I also liked the rhymes incorporated within this piece, the flow is pretty good.

Content wise, I found this piece to be sad, yet understandable. And just like the above comment, the beauty that should outshine is the one within, rather than the external one.
I can understand why you might feel not compliment when someone compliments you for your beauty, but just know that at that moment of being praised, they are praising you, not your mother.

Great write.