I love the way you are.

This is a very good poem, youve written it really well and your chioce of wording suited the style of the overall piece! Also the flow worked quite nicely making this poem a very enjoyable read as the lines ran nicely into each other! Great work =]

Really good write. I loved how your details made me feel like I was there with you. I flow was good and your rhyming was not forced like some peoples writing is. My only suggestion would be to capitalize the first letter when you start on a new line, it would make your work look neater. I really like this poem 5/5 :D

Love the beauty this piece holds K.J ...

What really caught my eyes is your beginning line in the first 5 stanzas.

"I love the way you are"
^^^
Without wanting to change, re-arrange or fix anything about her ... now that is what love truly is. Beautiful !!!!!

...that there's nothing about you
from your fingers to your toes
that doesn't own my heart
because you are everything I love
^^^
Lovely ending !

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece K.J, very much enjoyed the read. ~hugs~

Good poem. it makes me smile with the words and descriptions you used. great job :)

Great poem!
there' s nothing about you from your fingers to your toes that doesn't own my heart..I LOVE this line
i also like the chocolate eyes and the name slipping past the lips
5/5 =D