I like it had a nice easy flow...
Which means I had to read it twice to know what I read haha.
But My favorite line of all the one I feel connects to me is as follows;

"Saturating my hair
With thoughts of strife and pain
Then sending them away
On down to the drain"

And Thank you for sharing(:

Very strong words, I loved the story you told, although sad.
It makes me curious, ya know?
Where is this person? what happened? what kind of day did he have? What does he do next?

Great poem, truly so.
5/5, well deserved.
because this piece spoke to me.

Ah...
this poem describes most of my nights lol :)
very well written

comment mine please? :)

I love how all your poems are smooth to read, if that makes any sense. Another winner^_^

U had a realy nice idea over here,,, i love the form and the word choice u had here.

u even made me wana shower when I reached the word cold...well done
u have an imaginative mind

5/5

Absolutly loved this poem. Very vivid and emotional. i could see the emotions of stress just wash away and then all of sudden come back to reality.

victoria