I wish I could write as delicately and beautiful as you do Sir. I am not a big fan of Haiku(s), but this is an exception. I can honestly say that I really enjoy all of your writes.

I never usually like giving short poems 5/5 because they always seem to lack effort and time. But you always seem to make yours pretty soid regardless of length or how long it took to write. I always enjoy your work because I believe that you feel the same way I do about posting anything that you don't absolutely love yourself.

I always love how you can write such short lines, but they always mean so much. it's amazing and i wish i had the ability to convey messages just as strongly! it's amazing how you do it! keep it up because this is perfect! :) would you please read my new one, "the morning sun"?

I dont like short poems but i feel like this on hit the point and had a very powerful message. So i am easily giving this a 5/5!

Short and Sweet! LOVED IT! =D !

5/5

--Hannah

A wonderful haiku, short and to the point. i was always terrible at haiku. It definitely portrays a lot more meaning than one would normally associate with a 5/7/5 syllable structure, well done, i think you embodied the intentions of a Haiku perfectly.

Sweet and simple. usually in my eyes, these have the most feeling :) i like this alot

This poem means absolutely nothing to me and it is way too short and indescriptive. it is definitely to short to mean any sense. unconditional means nothing in return where is the imagery of that strong feeling in this shallow poem i'm not sorry but the truth is that this is definitely a poor poem

Biblical allusion, i guess? Really nice haiku! Bravo!