I always envy the confidence to flow so freely and write from the heart with such novel imagery and deep feeling

I love this

This is such a deep poem. It really brings you in and makes you want to understand what your heart has to say.
Oh so lovely.

This was truly lovely, how you made it into a whole story with lots of information and a moral as well.

Well worth my time, this write was:))

God bless,

5/5 Ingrid

That was such a delighful write... lovely and beautifull...
some things can really change our outlook on life...

I definately can relate to this poem a lot and I'm sure many people who have experienced love can also. Its almost as if before the love of your life comes along your dreams are amazing and you can't wait to go to bed, but when you find that special someone your reality becomes better than your dreams and you can't wait to wake up beside them :) Great work excellent flow and imagery 5/5

This is a very beautiful write =] I enjoyed reading every word! The flow worked very well and the imagery you creadted was wonderful 5
A very talented write!

Wow this was beautiful. I love how you took something so simple as a sunrise or a "good morning" and created such a brillant work of art. I really enjoyed it! yay! the whole part about color and monochrome was my favorite. 5/5

"its calm and soothing
as we sit unmoving
words were never nessacary"

i love this part it reminds me of a country song that says "you say it best whenyou say nothing at all" it all comes back to that moment when everythings still and quiet it seems as if the world has stopped just for you and them you wrote this beautifully and the play of colors was interesting which kinda had my head spinning which is a good thing i really enjoyed this poem your very talented Bravo!!