The Elegance of Adolescence

by Indian Comma Bean   Feb 12, 2010


Somber throats choke on virulent words,
Heavy as dust that flutters as fog,
They stress like thorns on a Sunday dress,
Repress, confess, detest; Oh, passion
Might you grace our eyes.
Carmine lips spin fluid paradigms
Through ashen tongue and malefic grin,
Enticing innocence to fleet regret,
Sing to me sweet soliloquy
With your hand-me-down heart
And that worn out sin,
For I feel the fate that bestows such touch
Upon our delicate skin.
Cryptic riddles slither through the present,
Like quicksand, hopeless and afraid
They cower in the shadow of destiny,
Thirsting for life,
Withering in the depravity of
Our ignorance.

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  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    A sad but beautiful write 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 14 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Well thought out & great choice of words...a well deserved win.

  • 14 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    That is BEAUTIFUL! Very deep and profound, and I absolutely loved it!
    A well-deserved win!

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)
    Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good word choice and use of metaphors. It flowed nicely and was thought provoking. I tried to nominate this as well because it is deserving but it said my 3 votes were used already though I have only voted or 2 others.

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