A nice flow and some great word choice that really added to the description. I really enjoyed reading it, though I think simple is okay here and there and also blends nicely with some of your better chosen words. Overall you did a great job here, I believe you deserve a nomination, good work.

Good word choice and use of metaphors. It flowed nicely and was thought provoking. I tried to nominate this as well because it is deserving but it said my 3 votes were used already though I have only voted or 2 others.

Congrats on your win :)
Great job!

That is BEAUTIFUL! Very deep and profound, and I absolutely loved it!
A well-deserved win!

5/5

Well thought out & great choice of words...a well deserved win.

A sad but beautiful write 5/5

mandy :)