This was very well written. it definitely makes me think a lot deeper than the usual poems i read. these lines were my favorite though,
"They sit and mope in Exfinity,
forever on the run.
Comprehending not, the light
of an ever shining sun."
great job! :)

I'm pretty sure I read the first part of this poem and it was similar to this with the flow and religious views. I thought it was pretty good, a bit weird but atleast the flow was done really well again like the first one. I like that it was unique but I wouldn't continue writing more and more poems along the line of this one or they won't seem as good. Nice job

Interesting title.
I like the whole piece, actually. I like the play of words with 'exfinity' (is it a real word?) I find it shows a bit of your humor. The rhymes flowed really well whilst delivering the message smoothly. I haven't been writing rhymed poetry in a while, so I applaud you for patience and consistency lol.
It does seem like topics on religion and science are your forte. Stepping out of your comfort zone would be nice too.
Overall, a good read. Keep it up
-X

The religious theme of it made it more interesting, how the devil thinks is great is really foolish and i thank you for writing something like this to point it out to him.