Can totally relate to this, its a lot like my later teen years are turning out like, youve really summed up how it is to see lots, and have an overactive mind. nice job.

This is a very good write, Your flow worked extremly well and it was just the way you worded your poem in general that made it a more enjoyable read =] I aso found the heading of your poem to be very fitting to the piece

Reminded me of the book... which i thoroughly enjoyed.

''for when i am old
be happy in photographs
as my parents were
the medications have taken
everything pure
i see time colapse
a lifetime in one hour
im thinking too much''

i think this part is brilliant!!!

before that i think you were trying too hard to rhyme.

good one though 5/5

Cute

I think this is the second poem I've read of your where you call yourself a wallflower. I'm wondering if that's a slang term I need to look up to understand it better.

I looked it up:)

The Perks of Being a Wallflower is an epistolary novel written by American novelist Stephen Chbosky. It was published on February 1, 1999 by MTV. The story is narrated by a teenager who goes by the alias of "Charlie"; he describes various scenes in his life by writing a series of letters to an anonymous person, whom he does not know personally.

interesting... this poem is based off a book I see