Why did you leave me :(

by ibelievedhim   Feb 13, 2010


So much hurt, so much sadness
i miss the way things were before
color and light you brought to my life
i lay awake, my pillow is too wet to sleep
crying your name as i weep for what we lost
now makes me wonder if it was even there at all
tell me another lie, don't stop now you're doing well
why did you have to change, why did you have to leave
promise me things you knew you could never keep
i'll wait for you, words i swear i believed before
now i know better, and i will just ache always
please, don't desert me again, hold me
i need you and im NOT going to be ok
look my wrists are bleeding, dripping
your name is etched on my body
a part of me always and forever...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Rick5191

    Sh** dude. I like the poem. whenever I look at a poem I also look at the way its written. I like how each line starts relatively short, then gets longer and gets smaller again, driving the point home. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ryan

    That poem is the most realest and most true spoken poem i have ever heard that shit is so deep it gave me chills just reading it the last line is some real shit keep it up 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Megan

    I love this poem 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by paige

    Aww I love this poem,sad&beautiful.
    Thanks for your lovely comments on my poems :)
    xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Awww Katie...I don't know what to say...how come you get treated so bad, hunni?

    Life can be such a tought fight..but I am very sure you will come out a winner.

    Love you, lil lady,

    * big hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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