Paralyzed. [Collab]

by Courageous Dreamer   Feb 14, 2010


Loneliness penetrates silence
as I am paralyzed-
for all I have ever loved
has disappeared.

Like merry spring blossoms
that used to dance about my hair-
now charcoal ashes
of destroyed tomorrow's.

My heart submerged in kerosene-
feelings to be forever burned,
asphyxiated of love,
dreams of moonlit walks
on the beach subside.

Will we ever meet again
and dance to our blessed song?

Collab with Planned Parenthood Lies:
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1142846

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    //My heart submerged in kerosene-
    feelings to be forever burned,
    asphyxiated of love,
    dreams of moonlit walks
    on the beach subside.
    //
    such sad but beautifully penned lines... the imagery itself is so expressive ...

    beautiful write...

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Each stanza is written with an in depth
    feeling of sadness with a touch of loneliness..
    well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Thanks so much for collaborating this with me Temps and we wove together a masterpiece filled with sad sensations.

    Hope to write more with you later on!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    It is sad and has a lonely feeling to it. A good collab, can't tell who wrote what and that is a good thing. Well done to both.

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