It is sad and has a lonely feeling to it. A good collab, can't tell who wrote what and that is a good thing. Well done to both.

Thanks so much for collaborating this with me Temps and we wove together a masterpiece filled with sad sensations.

Hope to write more with you later on!

~MaryAnne

Each stanza is written with an in depth
feeling of sadness with a touch of loneliness..
well done.

//My heart submerged in kerosene-
feelings to be forever burned,
asphyxiated of love,
dreams of moonlit walks
on the beach subside.
//
such sad but beautifully penned lines... the imagery itself is so expressive ...

beautiful write...