This is a really touching poem, well written. thanks for sharing it.

Sounded like "A child called it" good though

sounded like my poem too now that i think about it.

but ne ways, goin to read more of your poems!!

Love,
Danielle

haha sorry i commented 3 times!

Hey that was a GREAT poem, i liked it alot, keep up the great work

Wow!! That poem was so sad and touching! You wrote it SO well...wonderful job!!!
Luv,
Amy

hey thank u all for the comments, and no this didnt happen to me. dainelle was right, i kind of got the inspiration from book, "A Child Called It". but thanks again everyone

Wow....Great Poem It Was Very Sad And Touching. I Feel Really Strongly About Child Abuse I Think It Is One Of The Worst Things We Have In This World We Could Do Without Because Its Not Right To See Little Children Who Have Done Nothing Wrong To Be Abused Just Because Their Parents Have Problems They Need To Take Out On Something Good Not On Their Children. Great Work And Keep It Up.

its really good that this didnt happen to you!! this is an excellent poem and yes while i was reading it it reminded me of that book!! keep writing you are SO good!!

amazing ... sad poem but very well written... hope u can visit mine... ciao =)

kaily?....what the hell is wrong wit you...JEALOUS?...yea im sure you are, i would be too...this girl is an amazing writer...DONT HATE

umm excuse me. but the poem is mine and i wrote it

wow so touching. i too have read the child called it book and the others as well and i think that this poem was soooo great because i know what it is like to be abused by my parents, not this bad..........i dont know what the hell i am trying to say...great poem...keep writing

wow so touching. i too have read the child called it book and the others as well and i think that this poem was soooo great because i know what it is like to be abused by my parents, not this bad..........i dont know what the hell i am trying to say...great poem...keep writing

Omg... that's horrible, I hope you're ok now