Comments : Reflecting on what's gone

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I used to think I loved my ex but after finding my fiancee I realized what true love really was. I don't even think about my ex ever she doesn't come into my mind anymore because the memories I made with her don't come close to the memories I have now. I loved the poem it was nice to see that you've moved on from something that once met so much to you, yet made you cry. You know now how much pain you went through but just how much stronger it made you for your next relationship. Great work very real emotions and feelings 5/5 :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Anonymous

    I love this poem. Very well put together. I can definitely relate. Great job! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Lu

    It's now a reminder of what I don't miss
    You're not worth one second of my cries
    ^^^
    That's my baby girl !!!! ~claps~
    So very true. Those who hurt us are not worth our tears. Course at the time we think that life has ended. But in reflecting we see what was there all along ....
    "a reminder of what I don't miss"

    Great read Chels!
    ~tears~ my baby girl is growing up ~hugs~

  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    Chelsey! First of all, I have to say thankzies for the comment you left me XP And now on to your awesome poem...

    I love loved how you started this poem too!
    "Reflecting on what's gone
    Has reminded me of what I don't miss"
    Two lovely lines I loved so much (:

    I like how you seemed strong and fearless in facing the trauma love has left you. All so often, we have to go through quite a few people before we actually realise or find what we were looking for. See this as a stepping stone hun, the next one would be better! Reading this somehow injected this sense of bravery in me so I loved this one of yours. Keep writing doll!!!!