Love, Lost in time

This was almost a nature poem to me. I love the first stanza about the owl. I would have never thought to use that animal in a poem. Very clever and beautiful in a way. The imagery was breath taking and really made this poem come to life for me. I love the syntax as well. Your lines were smooth and flawless making this a total masterpiece. Wonderful work dear. Nik

Lonely was the night, hooted an owl nearby,
slowly she glided , under star-studded sky,
Silver gown flowed, over the velvet moss,
waved dark tresses, reflecting angelic gloss,

^^What a lovely image you have drawn here!

Blossoms lay dried,withered was her heart
engraved on a stone - Till Death do us part.
Each dusk, when sun goes down the hill,
arrives her apparition, serene and still.

^^So sad & a chilling image..a love lost..beautifully penned!

The flow was perfect and I really loved your descriptive chioce of wording, you created some very beautiful imagery =]
Excellent job! 5/5 This was a very enjoyable read

Raj, how sad, the ghost of a woman returning to the place she remembers her love. Well done.

Beautiful. Honestly.