Comments : The Masked Ball

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I'd have to say that this one is my favorite out of the three I've read. A poet's job is to find a way to say something, but with the best words that fit together to describe it. Your rhyming was spot on, nothing came out forced. Great use of the word facade, you should try using a thesaurus for your other poems, it will strengthen them. Your first stanza was my favorite part.

    5/5

    Keep Writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    My favorite stanza was also the first one!
    the second stanza, all though it did rhyme, had too many syllables in its 3rd line. This threw off the beat a bit for me.
    I dig the idea of the poem, but am unsure what relevance "how far or close you are" to the antagonist plays