I'd have to say that this one is my favorite out of the three I've read. A poet's job is to find a way to say something, but with the best words that fit together to describe it. Your rhyming was spot on, nothing came out forced. Great use of the word facade, you should try using a thesaurus for your other poems, it will strengthen them. Your first stanza was my favorite part. |
by East Poetry
My favorite stanza was also the first one! |