Comments : If I Will Fall

  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    I love poems that reader's can relate to, such as this one. A lovely flow and you chose your words carefully. But i can tell you were speaking from your heart. My favorite part was when you said 30 years from now.. I think like that too. Love is such a mystery sometimes.. anyways, very well done, keep those poems coming. 5/5

    -Ashlei

  • 14 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    Thank you :)