Fallen (Rictameter)

by Angie   Feb 17, 2010


Fallen

fallen
head over heels
with big baby blue eyes
a smile that lights up the room
a loving heart that beats with compassion
trust, honesty, sense of humor
yet shy and reserved too
in love I have
fallen

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  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Hmmmm...one can only speculate...we won't go there today...not now...not here....hehehe

    This is a beautiful peice. I've tried these and it's so hard to get it out and have it make sense while still flowing naturally. You've done it here. This is wonderful! Beautiful write.

  • 14 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    You've penned another lovely formed piece!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Melissa

    I love how you rounded it back to fallen. I was wondering how you would, and it certainly was no disappoinment. I love rictameters, and this was very sweet. :)