I love how you rounded it back to fallen. I was wondering how you would, and it certainly was no disappoinment. I love rictameters, and this was very sweet. :)

You've penned another lovely formed piece!!

Hmmmm...one can only speculate...we won't go there today...not now...not here....hehehe

This is a beautiful peice. I've tried these and it's so hard to get it out and have it make sense while still flowing naturally. You've done it here. This is wonderful! Beautiful write.