Good write...whoever she/he is... just well uhmmm...sucks...you're nice,ok?this is very good.

Yeah, I could tell while reading that you were really writing out of anger and impulse; but these are the best writes. It is full of emotion and voice and truth. But, in certain places throughout this poem, you used slang (like: cause instead of because). I think that you should just go back and correct those (because it sort of reads as a slang poem instead). But that is just a suggestion. Overall, this was a very dark and wonderful write. Good job. I gave this a 5 because I believe that it deserves it. Continue writing.

-KJ

This is a very good poem, the flow works well and youv'e displayed your emotions quite strongly in this piece =]
Overall an excellent and very expressive write 5/5