Where do i start?

I am walking through this rain
i am feeling so much pain
I loved you
But you had no clue
Tell me where do i start
Coz its breaking my heart
i am so lost without you
I couldn't help but feel so blue
Hold me close
And why not give me a rose?
But I know we're just friends
My heart won't mend
So tell me where do i start
Coz its breaking my heart

~if you'll notice its the same content as my other poem...just tell me if you dont like it. i would appreciate comments. please and thanks~