Comments : Erase My Memories [Acrostic]

  • 14 years ago

    by Sora

    A wonderful piece. Quite interesting, unique! i loved it. The title was very catchy, i had to take a look. And i'm glad i did.

    My life is filled with self-inflicted wounds and bullets that didn't fit right,

    i liked that line alot, very deep. this piece was undeniably powerful. keep those poems coming! 5/5

    -Ashlei

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Acrostics are hard to do without sounding forced to find words to fit the form but you have made it seem easy. (smiles) If only we could erase memories from our minds. That would make life and things much easier to deal with. Well done.